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I went to Torres, two years ago, with my friends.
We stayed for six days in twelve people in one house.
Had a clouded time. It rained and windyed during every day.
But we had a lot of fun. We sang, we spoke, drank and too and went out at night.At night we walked in the shopping center, later we went to parties in a beach next to Torres.
The time went didn’t good , but me and my friends were very happy.
I loved the trip.
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ResponderExcluirI went to Torres, two years ago, with my friends.
We stayed for six days in twelve people in one house.Had a clouded time. (IT) Rained and windyed during every day.
But (WE HAD A LOT OF) fun. We sang, we spoke, drank and too (AND)went out at night.At night we walked in the shopping center, later we went to part(IES) in a beach next to Torres.
The time good didn’t went (???) , but (ME) and my friends (WERE) very happy. I loved the trip.